Friday, February 15, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23 - Dog Fighting

Dog fighting should be illegal. For example, it's bad for dogs because it is a distinct form of abuse. In addition, there will be less dogs  because they will almost all die. Dog fights formulate money but in the end it kills a lot of dogs. Also, people who abuse their dog potentially abuse their kids. In conclusion, dog fighting should be illegal.

1 comment:

  1. You have good ideas, but I wish you had elaborated on them a bit more. Keep working!

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